by .K.i.T.t.Y. Jul 17, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
NOTE TO READERS: I've revised it. Let me know what you think. |
by Fsams
Such a rush I feel within my veins, |
by stefanie
Wow. this was interesting. it was very dark. the imagery and the flow was amazing. i never read a poem like this one. its greatly and uniquely written. |
Interesting, but remember: keep the reader captivated. This really didn't do anything for me; no lines stuck out and I really didn't like the beginning. |
by JaMeS
Very dark and descriptive poetic i like im not usually into dark poems so you did well :) top notch |
This is a fantastic poem, the imagery and flow are absolutely amazing throughout. The poem is very unique and starts of strong and only gets better as the reader goes on. Excellent job 5/5 GG23 |