True Love

by RealityIsNotWhatItSeems   Jul 17, 2007


I knew you were thinking of me
and secretly looking at me
I pretended not to realize
but i felt that little spark
between us

From the very first moment
I knew it was something special
you and me
it was destiny
All seemed everlasting
and meant to be

But once
I'll forget
our first kiss
our first touch
our first disagreement

but I will never forget our true love...

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  • 17 years ago

    by kaitlynmaggie

    You're so awesome! I can't stop reading, your poems just make my heart flutter and remember times that made me feel the way your poems express. 5/5

    -katie

  • 17 years ago

    by Tiffaney

    That a sweet and short poem like i like great job 5\5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    WOW that was totally awesome , you did a wonderful job on this piece, well written and love the style, great job,,, your friend Tracy d 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Aww the ending was perfect! It flowed nicely, straight to the point, good job. Just a suggestion to use more punctuations =)

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