Aww the ending was perfect! It flowed nicely, straight to the point, good job. Just a suggestion to use more punctuations =)

WOW that was totally awesome , you did a wonderful job on this piece, well written and love the style, great job,,, your friend Tracy d 5/5

That a sweet and short poem like i like great job 5\5

You're so awesome! I can't stop reading, your poems just make my heart flutter and remember times that made me feel the way your poems express. 5/5

-katie