Wow, this is so sad. im so sorry for you if this is true.
this is an amazing poem, you're a wonderful writer.
the rhmying was great, none of it seemed forced at all. the flow was a little jumpy in places for me, but it didn't take that much away from the poem.
great job overall
5/5

~Sandra

I can relate to this poem so well, I think most people who have lost there first love can probably relate. Excellent poem with great emotion and flow, really does deserve a 5/5 GG23

I love the way in which you convey your feelings..Um your writing is good, I was able to experience what you were feeling through your words keep up the good work

Hope

Loved the last stnza, and the last line just, was perfect to end it all with. another 5/5 keep it up!
^_^

I didnt really feel this poem sorry but it must of had alot of feeling put into it and im sorry for your bad past relationship :)

And /again/ nothing stuck out. At this point, that should be telling you something. It's cliche, and it kills the whole poem, not to mention nothing to catch the readers attention.
So.
And same as before, again. Sighs. I hate repeating myself. Good flow and okay rhyming, but remember punctuation.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 4.5

This is an amazing, sad poem. It always hurts when someone you love doesnt love you back. And it hurts o much that at times you eel like you cant handle it anymore.

The flow was amazing and it is a great poem. 5/5

Kale

It was a great poem, It flowed well. I really like the first 4 lines in the poem, good job.

I really love this line.
But I was wrong; and our love tore apart
^^It made the poem extra exciting =)

Just a suggestion to use more punctuations =)

Nonetheless, A great poem.
Keep up the good work!

I thoguht it was ok
i mean it had a nice flow
but the ending could have been way better

"Take her hand and look into her eyes
But never forget that I will love you
Always and forever like I promised
I'm just not ready to say my adieu"

favorite part ^^

4/5

The flow was good throughout this poem as is it mainly throughout most of your other poems. The structure again different and i'm sure so many people can relate to this. Although the emotion didn't seem to be in this piece, I really couldn't feel anything from it and nothing caught my eye. Overall a 4/5. ~mel

This poem isn't excellent. Atmosphere is good but it could be even more better. Your other poems are better... It deserves 4/5.

The emotion was to me, clouded. I really didn't like it but at the same I thought it had room for improvement. But this isn't really worst to what you think. I find it to be good enough. Really.

realised

And I believe that this word needs to be changed.

A good attempt anyway.