Well written...i like the way each stanza collects a single thought.

Ohemgee; words can not explain how much I loved this poem. It truly took my breath away. This is exactly the kind of poem that I needed to read right now, I related to it very well and I like that. :) The word choice was awesome and the flow was good as well, I loved this, absolutely loved it.

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Jennuhh.

This is beautifully written...the emotion and depth in this piece are overwhelming.
I loved the wording you used, and the ending stanza is intense and hardhitting, a stunning ending to such a beautifully heartfelt piece.

I'm sure so many people can relate to a poem of this standards. Every word breathe taking capturing my soul, heart and mind. Not one error throughout it. Loved the long lines really greatly structured. The flow didn't flaw what so ever it had a perfect rythem. Word usage powerful. You went into great depth on this poem. Loved it~mel