by 4EvErMaKeBeLiEvE Jul 17, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I'm standing in the shadows |
by Nobody
This poem is really good i like the concept in a relationship you are obvously the giver, the one gives everything but sometimes the person takes that for granted and they dont return the love that you give, i hope everything works out. a few spelling errors but other than that i really like it! 5/5 xxxxxx |