Silence.

by Solus   Jul 17, 2007


Mists of memory that fade are hard to perceive.
Shadows cloud my thoughts, making it easy to deceive.
Ruined hallways hold broken and shattered doors.
I'd rather forget walking on fate's dark shores.
Deep in the night demonic ravens call.
Beasts of the powers dark beg for innocence to maul.
Lies folded into the cold blacked bog.
Its vapors inhaled by the lost wandering in the fog.
In these grey lands there's no hope or reliance.
The most terrifying sound one can hear here is silence

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  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    I like the rhyme within the poem. It adds another dark sort of appeal to the poem. It flows nicely as well.

    I like the portrayal of the dark. Lies folded within, its dark call, the connection to the raven. It works very nicely together and I like it.

    Evokes a deep sense of depression, being sucked into a darkness that is hard to escape where lies roam through your head and get lost.

    Interesting

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I don't understand why is this poem so low- rated. I absolutely like everything about that. You created so vivid imagery, painted with darkness that is overwhelming. And the ending... I'm in awe...
    Brilliant piece of dark poetry.
    5/5 from me

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