You did a fantastic job Gabriella. I really like the rhyming of the poem, well done. Flow was flawless. I think to improve this you should try to use metaphors etc. But it's a GREAT poem ^_^

You deserve a 5/5!

Interesting poem. I like it very much. Ending is great. You wrote this piece superbly and atmosphere that you created is excellent.
-a gasp, so slight, almost unknown
the thud, the newborn bird has flown
rushed away by the silver stream
her lifeless body, washed clean-
^my favorite stanza.
Well done 5/5

This was a terrific poem, you have a really great imagination and made this poem so interesting. Yet the flow was a tad bit off, but only a tad. They rhymes were amazing and I just adored this piece, keep on writing. You're really really good!

I simply don't know what to say to that poem. It was amazing...

Truly amazing.
--elly.