Very nice wording, but very very sad. Something I'm sure many can relate to. I loved the rhyme and flow it was near perfect!
Charisma*

Tears were falling down my pale white cheek -
I thought I had broken my bad luck streak.
[[ I really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really....ect..hate this rhyme. It's so cliche for you!]]

The locket you gave me still hung around my neck,
As if it was a sign of his broken regret.
[[But, I love this rhyme. =] ]]

Because I Was Hoping You Had The Key To My Heart
[[And I Love this line. Beautiful.]]

I really liked this, although the topic was cliche. Everyone writes about a broken heart, yet somehow, you managed to not make it as cliche and bring something out in it. Nicely done.
Oh. And nice job on punctuation! =]]

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

I like the ending very much. Third stanza is bad but rest of poem is excellent. Atmosphere that you created is interesting and you described emotions greatly. 5/5

I liked this, although the topic was cliched..[what topic isn`t these days? lol] you still found a way to make it unique...I love that about your work, great job Hunn.

5.5
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heartchuu.