Tis a very good poem gene, love the imagery, and how you sembolized the day as you did, i give it a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

Wow dude, the beauty of this amazing poem is how you even notice the minute also, beside that how beautiful is it at a moment like this you feel that beauty plus rain, i can picture that and even if it was me i would run into rain like crazy,lol.
comparing this poem to other poems, we can feel the up s and down s of this life, sometimes we feel so sad yet we see a happiness knock our doors... that is the beauty of life...

keep up the great job sir.

Fantastic.
I love how you symbolized the day and the exact minute, what a beatiful and memorable moment it must have been.
The flow was a little off but you made up for it with the emotions you laced through each word.
The imagery was amazing. I felt as if I was watching on the television or something.

Truly a good write and an even better read.
Keep it up,
Elaine.

The title in itself is catchy.. And I love the way in which you structured the poem.. I especially love these lines "My knees where shaking
My heart beats was racing
"

The romantic remembering of a climactic moment is intense and the delivery is smooth

I was looking for you in the line When finally say yes! When you finally say yes! but my word processor has no problem with it so I must be tired. I enjoyed this one

The title is very unique i like it so is the poem. it was great!

Urrrgh, stop being cheesy, hun! It's too sweet! Haha. Glad to know you received a sweet 'yes' from your little darling, huh. So am I not authorized to call you honey now? :( I hope not. ;D Ha!

Best wishes, anyway. :)

Wow that poem made me smile you should feel accomplished not many poems make me smile well except for funny poems lol 5/5