My world

by Veamm   Jul 18, 2007


My world

I searched my eyes, no one's around
heard no voice any single sound
I felt calmness for the first time
no trouble, no words to rhyme

I and myself, me and the world
is this true, I hold the world
the world is mined at last
on my owned, no one to trust

things on my plan, my decision
no one to blame my operation
on my feet, my hand to choose
no friend, no words to loose

I feel joy and anger of being alone
in this feeling, I felt home
I heard silence and cruelty of being me
stop dreaming,can you save me

on my own world, my own dream
in my world, no one hear me scream
on my own world, my own funeral
in my world, I feel special

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  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    Meaningful poem that's really deep, describing your own world like this. Enjoyful piece, easy to read.
    Keep it up! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Pesamenteiro

    Good poem but you should try adding a word or taking one away in some places so it'll flow better.
    Other than that it's a wonderfull poem.
    4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Noelle Wright

    Um i dont get it does it mean you are dead? Lmao Its a thinking poem this one is ^^ great work

    Noelle

  • 17 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    This one i love very true and meaningful you did real good in describing what it is in your world and that in my book is a talent i would do anything to try to escribe my world 5/5

    laura

  • 17 years ago

    by enigmatic_prey

    Wow that was great.. I really love your poem

    keep up the good work
    5/5

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