Wow that was great.. I really love your poem

keep up the good work
5/5

This one i love very true and meaningful you did real good in describing what it is in your world and that in my book is a talent i would do anything to try to escribe my world 5/5

laura

Um i dont get it does it mean you are dead? Lmao Its a thinking poem this one is ^^ great work

Noelle

Good poem but you should try adding a word or taking one away in some places so it'll flow better.
Other than that it's a wonderfull poem.
4/5

Meaningful poem that's really deep, describing your own world like this. Enjoyful piece, easy to read.
Keep it up! 5/5