by my name is Llama Jul 18, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
A floury of people floating slowly around her |
by Oscar
I liked the story that this poem was portraying and the poem flowed really well but i had a slight problem with the rhyming. In the first stanza you rhymed the words her and for then you repeated the rhymes in a following stanza. It just irked me a little bit but still a good poem overall. |
by JaMeS
Really nice poem nice work :) |
by nikki
Wow. i loved it. it was beautifully written. 5/5 |