Wow. i loved it. it was beautifully written. 5/5

Really nice poem nice work :)

I liked the story that this poem was portraying and the poem flowed really well but i had a slight problem with the rhyming. In the first stanza you rhymed the words her and for then you repeated the rhymes in a following stanza. It just irked me a little bit but still a good poem overall.

4/5