Wow.. this is a really good wirte! its vry dark, but it was very well written i loved the staza:
The chanting silence here,
Please, be not afraid.
For now you must join,
The Undead parade.
That was so gripping and heart hitting, none of the rhyming felt forced, and it had a great flow. great write .
5/5
xXx

WOw, i thought that was amazing

it was very dark and there was alot of emotion and a certain air to it that made it a good read

"Choking on the life we once had,
Remembering all the taunting.
Toying with our own minds,
Our forgotten souls are haunting. "

favorite stanza^^

5/5