Baby, don't make me cry.

Teria, So far this is the best poem I have read by you. The emotions I must say were beautifully deep and really touched home for me at this very minute. Each word created a hit to my heart so to say. I loved the flow hun, the word choice touching. Amazed by this poem I truely am. Loved it. 5/5. Well done ~mel

Great poem. Very powerful. I loved it. 5/5

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Well, Teria.
-=Smiles.=-
Pleasure to see you again. Lol.
Well type to you.
Powerful words in a short piece of writing.
Amazing job, hun.
Take care.

-Heather

Wow.. this was very emotional.. and your word choice was amazing, it really uplifted the poem from an average to a way beyond average. it was a sad poem but you penned it beautifully. and again although short, it really spoke to me, a very indepth poem.
I really liked this poem because the words you chose to use spoke to me in a different level, and they made you hang on to everything that was said. Also because there was a great message behind it.
deffinatly a 5/5

Wow.. This poem was incredibly deep, it just hit me.. Loved it.