Very good statement...

I really enjoyed this poem, your rhyming scheme was different, which made it pleasure to read from the usual aabb or abab rhyming schemes. It was a heartfelt peice that was a joy to read. I think that the length was just the right size, though it was good, if it was too long i think the uniquness would have shortened!
but i really enjoyed this poem because i could relate, and it was not the typical love poem that you get normally.
xXx

This poem is okay...its not really the type of poem that i like to read...to be honest, it didnt have quite enough information to draw my attention towards the poem....its not the worse poem but its also not the best....overall i would give you a 4/5.....

maybe add onto your poem or change some of the wording around and it could be better..

The poem was fairly written, Umm I felt as though something was missing from it. Probably it was your choice of words, try rephrasing some of the lines and it will be much better.. Though it was not the best.. I should point out that I enjoyed your use of simile...'Hard as Nails' work on it, I see great potential in it..
~Hope~

Hmm... the rhyming scheme made it hard to follow but the point was still made.. i liked the wording a lot. overall 4/5