What a beautiful write and one that certainly touched my heart and I am sure will touch the hearts of any mother whom reads this one.

Cindy , that was a very beautiful poem, well written from the heart, and flow was great , joy to see a mom's love been shown , great job ,your friend Tracy d 5/5

p.s hope you have a wonderful day .

Very touching symbol of love to your son...you captured the emotions of parenthood, and its evident that its a major part of your life..lots of love expressed throughout its entirety..keep up the good work cindy

Beautiful emotions penned....i understand what what you mean my friend.... It isn't the wealth you found. That will make you happy, it's how you touch, The lives that are all around. To live life well is an art: How people love you, how they regard, Is all in the size of your heart. have a good day, take care.. Bert.

That is so beautiful poem cindy filled with love and joy for something so precious and special, and close and dear to your heart and you wrote about it perfectly well done cindy xox sam

Aww this was so sweet cindy, nice of you to write your son a poem, love the flow, i give this a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

This is the sweetest poem ever!
<3

All my pain forgotten
When laid into my arms
Making you a promise
To keep you from all harm

this stanza for this stanza i have been waiting for my whole life. the person who makes true this stanza in my life..

it was a great poem. take care
5/5

Oh wow. I really enjoyed that.. The title was perfect.. Everything was perfect.. It was really touching. =)

Beautiful dedication as said by me before too. This is really a very nicely written poem. The way it started...it was like movies and then it flowed so beautifully....so much is said in so little words and the depth is still so intense....great

all the best and take care

Wow, this is a fantastic peom, and great to read. welldone =D

$ian

There was a nice flow. 5 syllables.

*tear*...absolutley excellent!!....I mean Cindy what a great love you have for your son...thats incredible and something every child deserves to feel and if every child got the love that you give, the world would be a better place! Excellent write!
Chels

Wow, this poem is full of love!

This gave me a smile. :) It also made me understand my parents' feelings better. In due time, it will be my turn to become a mother, too. But... for the moment, I still have to enjoy being and young and single. Lol! Have a beautiful day, Miss Cindy. The last line is very remarkable. "I Love You Son." :) So nice.

That's a beautiful poem, and congratulations to you on your baby. Best of luck!

What a beautiful dedication and memory of a precious child. Excellent job. I bet this means a lot to your baby!!