Paradise

by liiz   Jul 18, 2007


A month ago, I was the happiest girl ever
But paradise was soon destroyed
Jealousy, rumors, and need for passion ended it.
We had made many promises but soon
they lost there meaning
Hope for our love was gone and couldn't be found
Summer is suppose to be full of love...
But I'll always remember it as the summer in which you
left footprints in heart and shattered it!

hey people please tell me what you think about this!! =)

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  • 16 years ago

    by XoXoBriannaoXoX

    I lyk it alot!!! i give it 4/5!!!! great job....

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    I liked it, but I agree with Ello; it needs more...description too it.

    but I think you are getting the hang of it, so keep it up. 3/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    Its okay, it needs more work. but dont get me wrong liked it. just need to put more description. 3/5