Comments : Paradise

  • 16 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    Its okay, it needs more work. but dont get me wrong liked it. just need to put more description. 3/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    I liked it, but I agree with Ello; it needs more...description too it.

    but I think you are getting the hang of it, so keep it up. 3/5

  • 16 years ago

    by XoXoBriannaoXoX

    I lyk it alot!!! i give it 4/5!!!! great job....