by Becky Jul 18, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Lines and marks |
by jenna grace
The message was brillant. good job. <3333 5/5 |
by Meghan
I really like the message of this poem. i think its a good idea. i just think that if you didnt rhyme it you would be able to use more descriptive words that could make the poem better. over all though i liked it. keep writing. [: |