The perfect drawing

by Becky   Jul 18, 2007


Lines and marks
circles and hearts
the perfect drawing
its so hard im almost bawling
i look at it in the end and i realize
its just a bunch of scribbles and scrappy
i worked so hard and it turned out crappy
then someone walks over and says wow thats the best drawing ive even saw
and i wonder at the shock of it all
i found out that all art is beautiful in some ones eyes
some think its so beautiful that they start to cry

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  • 17 years ago

    by jenna grace

    The message was brillant. good job. <3333 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Meghan

    I really like the message of this poem. i think its a good idea. i just think that if you didnt rhyme it you would be able to use more descriptive words that could make the poem better. over all though i liked it. keep writing. [:

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