Comments : The perfect drawing

  • 17 years ago

    by Meghan

    I really like the message of this poem. i think its a good idea. i just think that if you didnt rhyme it you would be able to use more descriptive words that could make the poem better. over all though i liked it. keep writing. [:

  • 17 years ago

    by jenna grace

    The message was brillant. good job. <3333 5/5