Semiprecious {{etheree}}

by .K.i.T.t.Y.   Jul 18, 2007


Gems
Sparkle
Behind the glass,
Reflecting color
With each sharp little turn
When the sun shines upon them,
Shimmering Opals and Garnets,
Resting on gold and silver thin chains,
Laying in glass cases of a jeweler.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    I think this is a reaaaally well written piece. It's captivating, and rhythmic. You've taken a simple subject, and painted it exquisitely! Awesome job!

    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another wow poem by my favorite poet,
    im wondering why this poem got low rating while it deserve a perfect 5/5, i guess ppl are forgetting the defination of the art of poetry.lol

    this was another great one dear.

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow so well written and well adhered to the rules. Great, so much of meaning added with few words. 5/5 all the way

    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Nice writing i understand why the title now...

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I just read my first etheree poem yesterday actually and it was really good, but this one can give it a run for it's money. You really did a fantastic job with this piece 5/5 GG23

    p.s. I was just returning the favour since you saw I was on *winks*