I just read my first etheree poem yesterday actually and it was really good, but this one can give it a run for it's money. You really did a fantastic job with this piece 5/5 GG23

p.s. I was just returning the favour since you saw I was on *winks*

Nice writing i understand why the title now...

Wow so well written and well adhered to the rules. Great, so much of meaning added with few words. 5/5 all the way

Fsams

Another wow poem by my favorite poet,
im wondering why this poem got low rating while it deserve a perfect 5/5, i guess ppl are forgetting the defination of the art of poetry.lol

this was another great one dear.

I think this is a reaaaally well written piece. It's captivating, and rhythmic. You've taken a simple subject, and painted it exquisitely! Awesome job!

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N