Can i keep you?

by StonedGooberz   Jul 18, 2007


Can I keep you?
within my arms
delighting you
with my sophisticated charms.

Can I keep you?
through out the night
feeling the warmth
of when are passion ignites.

Can I keep you?
under the moonlit sky
living this screwed up life
together on a constant hi.

Can I keep you?
even when life becomes rough
I need someone to believe
that love is more then enough.

Can I keep you?
when it’s cuddle time
I like being the teddy bear
hoping you like this rhyme.

Can I keep you?
for the rest of my life
here’s me on my knees
asking for you to be my wife.

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yea its for real i just proposed
sincerely, Smiling

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nelle

    Awwwwwwwww that is soo cute! I would love someone to propose to me like that. That is so freakin adorable. Great great job!

  • Hey. i love it. i wish i had read it b4. it was about me right? well ttul.......*Cuddle Bear*

  • Hey. i love it. i wish i had read it b4. it was about me right? well ttul.......*Cuddle Bear*

  • 17 years ago

    by Everly

    Awwwwww

  • 17 years ago

    by The Undoing

    A very beautiful proposal. I'm glad she said yes.
    Well done,
    =)

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