Sam,

I love when you write dark poetry... it's just amazing && this is no different.

"Falling to the ground,
The face kisses earth."
^ I love that 2nd line. Very creative. Gah! Wonderful.

"Haunted by constant; Depression.
Judged bitterly everyday.
Filled with all this negativity.
Caused by things 'They' say about me."
^ I can relate to that stanza so much.. :/ I'm judged every day because of my mistakes.

The flow was flawless, the vocab was amazing, && overall, I loved it. [Just like Iloveyou!!] Lol.

Fantastic write. :] 5.5
- Steph <3

This poem is sooo sad, It felt like you are drained, emptied, negativity pulling you down.
I want to give words of encouragment, but I have been and also am in that "whirlpool".
How does one give advise when one is in it also?
Just keep fighting the good fight, believe me I know it gets tiring, like fighting a never ending battle.
So much more I want to say, in such a small place and yet what more can I say, because nothing changes and I am not in your "shoes".
Just to let you know I care and am here, and I know I don't know you at all, and may not know the right things to say or put it into words, but your poems say a lot about you and it's all great! :-)

Great poem keep it up