Stronger than rock

by Kirsty palmer   Jul 18, 2007


The rock that holds me straight
The wind that keeps me flying
The person who helps me to sedate
The one who stops me crying

The cushion that breaks my fall
The hand that soothes my face
The one where happy memories I recall
The one no one could ever replace

You were the one who was always there
Picked me up when I hit the floor
When you're here I have no despair
Yes, you are my heart; My core

In your eyes I can see the light
And in your heart I can feel your love
You're the one who can stop anything I ignite
You are my gift from above

Always there to pull me through
My female knight that rescues me
It is always going to be me and you
Never shall we disagree

So thank you for being my rock
For standing by me when times were hard
Thank you for being my hidden lock
My personal emotional guard

And now you should know I'm here
So you can always come around
Because I want to steer you clear
I want to stop you from hitting the ground

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  • 17 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    I meant to say that the flow was good. Sorry for minor mistakes.

  • 17 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    Quite an inspiring piece. The sway of the flow was and this was quite descriptive. I don't theres anything wrong in this poem except the lack of punctuation marks that would really improve the flow. Nevertheless, this is indeed an inspiring and lovely piece. Great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    Very strong and positive. I thought why it isnt under love poems, but it's probly about your mum or a very good friend, and thats how life is everyone needs a person who would be there for them. Loved the flow.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    This poem is very positive! It is greatly written but I don't like fourth stanza. Rhyming is very interesting and original! It deserves 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I did like this poem, I found the dedication behind this piece to be truely great. Although from the 4th stanza the flow started to rock to me it just didn't flow as smooth. I think you need to add a little more punctuation which would also held the flow. Overall a sweetly written piece. ~mel

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