I can tell this is probly about your mom i love the stanza In your eyes I can see the light
And in your heart I can feel your love
You're the one who can stop anything I ignite
You are my gift from above

that is so poetic and pretty nice flow. Try to write free verse.

This had good rhymes and was so good it showed a lot of your voice!

Again, not to bad, but nothing about your work sticks out to me. They're just words; I don't feel any emotion in them, nor are there any catchy lines.
However, the rhyming, again, was clean, as was the flow, so keep that up.
And punctuation; remember that.

Just remember: The more catchy it is, the more people will want to read your work.

I want to give you a 4.5, but since I can't, and nothing really stuck out to me, I really have to give this a 4. Sorry.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 4.5

This was a great poem. the flow was a bit off in certain parts but it was still great. it made me smile cuz i feel that way about someone too. great write.

I thought the beginning was stronger then the end. this line
:Yes, you are my heart; My core:
didn't flow as well as the rest.
you're word choice was very good, getting a wide variety.
again, the rhyming didn't seemed forced (:
another great poem. 4/5

I have a smile on my face. This peice is absolutely adorable. I love the emotions and just the overall messgae of the poem. And your flow was pretty much perfect!
Great job!
5/5
((Amber))

Great rhyming, flawless in every stanza.
I like the flow of the whole piece, and the words that you used. My favorite line is:
-Yes, you are my heart; My core-
Well done, 5/5 from me

Very well done
this was such a great poem
i loved it so much

but i am not sure is it a poem
of love friendship
a realtionship of a mother and daughter?

jsut a thought

but still very good

5/5

I did like this poem, I found the dedication behind this piece to be truely great. Although from the 4th stanza the flow started to rock to me it just didn't flow as smooth. I think you need to add a little more punctuation which would also held the flow. Overall a sweetly written piece. ~mel

This poem is very positive! It is greatly written but I don't like fourth stanza. Rhyming is very interesting and original! It deserves 5/5

Very strong and positive. I thought why it isnt under love poems, but it's probly about your mum or a very good friend, and thats how life is everyone needs a person who would be there for them. Loved the flow.
5/5

Quite an inspiring piece. The sway of the flow was and this was quite descriptive. I don't theres anything wrong in this poem except the lack of punctuation marks that would really improve the flow. Nevertheless, this is indeed an inspiring and lovely piece. Great job.

I meant to say that the flow was good. Sorry for minor mistakes.