Why do you cut?

by Rose not your average   Jul 18, 2007


Why do you cut?
Why do you give me pain?
What happened to the trust?
This is nott a game!

Why do you do this?
You just left,
Why did you give me a kiss?
Why do you make it a theft?

I just want to know why?
Why do you do this all,
I did try!
You make me feel so small!

Why did you kill yourself?
Why did you take that knife?

You just watched the blood,
You watched drain from you,
Making a flood,
And we all knew.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    I think that this poem is amazingly good. Every line is full with emotions and it is greatly written. I like the ending, topic is interesting and unique. This piece is really deep! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Maria

    I really liked this poem. From what I have read its a fav so far of yours. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Mandz and Aly

    Its sad but very nice...always Manda

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Is not�t you need to edit that within this piece.
    The emotions I couldn't feel yet again, to tell you the truth I got kind of bored reading this. I liked the meaning portrayed it was nice and strong so well done with that. You just need to work on portrayed the emotions into each piece. 3/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Demise

    I can tell it has deep emotional feeling in this poem, But I dont see it much different just from a read of anyone elses poem that writes about cutting,

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