Summer

by Liz   Jul 19, 2007


I cant wait 4 the sun 2 shine
for the birds or the smell of pine
I wanna take that first dive
I wanna feel so alive

tired of sipping hot chocolate
and letting my days drift away
I've got so much to say
I can't wait 4 the day

means ninth grade next year
means friends will move away
means days in the sun
Hangin' out with friends havin' fun
tears by the friends you've lost
hugs from the ones you have

I can't wait 4 the sun 2 shine
for the birds or the smell of pine
I wanna take that first dive
I wanna feel so alive

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  • 17 years ago

    by Miss Behaving

    Aweeee, Thats adorable poem! Haha makes me want to go outside and run around! Its soooo hot out though. I went camping this summer had such a blast. Met new friends :P so sad they don't live close. One thing I have to say I didn't like though. The whole time I was out in the sun, A day in a half. I got sun burned soooo bad lol. My skin sucks :P i should have put some sun screen on ;) But awesome poem! Made me smile. 5/5 Keep up the Awesome work. Thanks for reading my poem as well. ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by RaiNe

    ..elow, thanks for your comment..
    ..i like this one, very refreshing for summer,hehe..

  • 17 years ago

    by miss insecurity

    I love this poem cuz its really happy and like i dunno its boyant

    its just a fun poem with a smooth flow and although structure abit eccentrically it works :]

  • 17 years ago

    by I - O - W - A

    Wow What A Touching Poem, Full Of Raw Emotion, Excellent!!

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