by Emo Jul 19, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
My heart already fragile |
by Kylie
I liked the way your lines were short, it made it flow better. Good work! |
OH..yeah!.. like what my poems are.. ^^, realy great job..!!....and i can relate myself here......i think its better if you used emotional terms...and long lines...just my opinion. ^^, keep it up.... |
by cassanova
Emotional |
Not as much emotion as some of your others, but still nice never the less. Even though there wasn't much emotion used, I could still tell how much pain you were in by the use of your words. |
by Broken Angel
Wow.. gr8 poem!! |