Kill Me!

by Emo   Jul 19, 2007


My heart already fragile
He ripped it out,
Crying still
Full of doubt,
Says he loves me but he hates me?
Why don't i see,
What is true
Is it cause I saw only you?
Withering away
No more need to stay,
Let me be
Try to be free,
Let me die
Before I cry,
Let me slip
Into silent abyss,
My blood will drip
As you realize this,
You killed me
Why didn't you see,
Just how much
You mean to me,
No longer in touch
Hung from a tall tree,
As I go
This you know,
I forever till end
Of time and beyond,
My love I will send
Life is now in a bond,
So I slip to death alone
So I say goodbye my love,
Could I not've been sewn?
I as my feet dove,
Twill ne'er hear my love again
Only to my disdain.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kylie

    I liked the way your lines were short, it made it flow better. Good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by musicMENDSbrokenHEART

    OH..yeah!.. like what my poems are.. ^^, realy great job..!!....and i can relate myself here......i think its better if you used emotional terms...and long lines...just my opinion. ^^, keep it up....

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by cassanova

    Emotional

  • 17 years ago

    by Shadows Reign

    Not as much emotion as some of your others, but still nice never the less. Even though there wasn't much emotion used, I could still tell how much pain you were in by the use of your words.
    Good Stuff.

  • 17 years ago

    by Broken Angel

    Wow.. gr8 poem!!
    keep it up!!!
    good job!!
    4/5
    =D