by debbylyn
Beautiful words Bert.....I love poems about poetry....this one is excellent.. |
Very nice... (i'm speechless) |
Whoa there...that's amazing. it flowed so perfectly, it was just...wow. Seriously, this is one of the best poems I've read on here in a long time. Thank's for sharing. |
Wow, this i really enjoyable read, and rather unique i must say; i have never read another poem based on this topic. Your words were amazing, and if this was the message God wanted you to convey im sure he would be happy because you done it perfectly. Your rhyming was flawless, and so was your structure! |
by Cindy
Bert |
by Anton
This is so amazing absolutly amazing such truth convayed so rythmicly I only hope that one day I shall write anything like this. |
Wow, this piece is flawless, and so beautifully written. I enjoyed in every line, in every word that you wrote very much. The whole atmosphere in this poem is great, and you truly deserve more then 5/5 for it. |
by Veamm
Wow..nice nice nice..haha..keep it up |
by dora
Great poem!! very well written 5/5 |
by ABake
This was beautiful. |
by Mr M
Oh my goodness! This is simply an amazing poem. Well done! |
by TrueLover
Excellent! |
Poet, don't keep silent |
Marvelous, as always! Great write Bert, and welcome back. I havent visited the site in a while, so I didnt know you were back. I've been really busy which is why I havent had the chance to write. But thank you for your comment, I really appreciated it. And as far as your poem goes, its a great piece, very honestly written and very inspiring. |
by Hebe
Great poem. |
by Deana
This is a truly beautiful message,a great way to view poetry. very well done. |
by Angie
Oh my, how did I miss this one.... there is such a powerful message within your words. Beautifully written Bert.... Smiles, hugs and love, Angela |
by June
Brilliant!!!...is all I can say ,loved it! |
I read your poem this morning. You my friend are a poets poet. What an amazing poem. Loved it! |
Thats inspiring. Really. Thats great work, really great. Thank you for this, I don't know how or why, but I think something inside me has changed. Thank you again. |