This is a pretty strong poem. good work on it :] keep it up

This poem was such a blessing to me becuase untill this moment i have previously decided to stop writing but u are right God gave me a gift maybe not as abundently as he gave you LOL=) but none the less a gift and its up to me to use if for his glory. Reach the broken and show them the hope in Christ. Thank you sincerly.

Simply put this was an excellent message and a wounderful poem.

Wow, this was great! thanks for sharing. i have one slightly like this called "songbird" but it's slightly more abstract. u should check it out. you have quite the fan club!

Wow, this poem is wonderful. You have something about you that just gives this piece energy and life, without over doing it. I like how there's style, flow, rhythm, and rhyme, but none of it overpowers other bits. You have perfectly balanced a fantastic piece and it just fits together so wonderfully. Your voice is clear, yet stays hidden too in a way. All in all, this piece is magnificent and definitely worthy of a 5/5 and I hope to go and read more of your works soon.

Thank you I needed to read this at this time