Comments : Fly To Me

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    Sad in the beginning, sweet in the end.
    Great piece if writing.
    Loved reading it.
    Take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a beautiful poem. Breath taking words of love.

    my heart remains open
    and i have nowhere to fly
    so when our time arrives
    oh won't you please fly to me?
    fly to me, stay with me
    never leave my loving arms...
    i'll let you fly, if that's your desire
    but i pray that once with me,
    you'll never leave...
    just promise your heart will stay with me.

    my love is forever yours
    and will never fly away.

    Love the ending.
    Excellent job!
    Take Care Cindy