by Loved In Hell Jul 19, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
A young girl was left |
by TillyMariex
Wow. i mean WOW. that was beautiful. i kept wondering what the bag was for and the ending was so sad. <333 |
by aDORKable x3
Awww what a sad yet lovely poem! It's truly touching. Even though she didn't have much, she offered it to him, but he ripped it up and tore her apart. Very emotional and well written. |
by azii
I loved the poem. I also liked the way you ended it: |
Ohh.... MACHINE GUN. Great emotion at the end of the poem, it feels as if you were actually the person, which I can hardly feel in most. 5/5 |
Ur a great poet |