by xjessx Jul 19, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
When I think of you |
Really cute poem! you did a great job i think that the repitition helps it so id keep it |
by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx
Great poem!I liked how you kept repeating "When I think of you, I think of him".Very well written.I would like to see more work from you soo.5/5^_^ |
by The Undoing
Very good. Sad but extremely well penned. Reworking the structure is my only suggestion. |
by Jacob Perry
I like i the poem though i think it is a little repetitious. still, the repetition does set a mood of sorts and adds a bit to the poem at the same time. either way, nice write, and keep at it. |
by Marc Ortiz
It's a good poem, straight to the point. Do you still love your ex? :( |