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It's a good poem, straight to the point. Do you still love your ex? :(

Anyway it flowed nicely.. Just a suggestion to use punctuations =) "A poem without a punctuation is like a song without a tune"

I like i the poem though i think it is a little repetitious. still, the repetition does set a mood of sorts and adds a bit to the poem at the same time. either way, nice write, and keep at it.

p.s. you do have talent all your own though i thank you for thinking that i have some too :)

Very good. Sad but extremely well penned. Reworking the structure is my only suggestion.
Cheers,
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Great poem!I liked how you kept repeating "When I think of you, I think of him".Very well written.I would like to see more work from you soo.5/5^_^

<3Amber

Really cute poem! you did a great job i think that the repitition helps it so id keep it
p.s. thanks for the comment! <33