Broken eternity

by Hannah Emellia   Jul 19, 2007


Twisted burning bodies, wither and decay,
As the broken morbid puppets come and want to play,
Drenched in bloody sacrifice, a king of bigotry,
Forming a dark nation for the ones too blind to see.

Burning all the bridges so his army can't turn back,
Vengeance is the bible to this god that's dressed in black,
Chaos reigns in his dark mind, has it driven him insane?
The earth is conquered, as is Hell, now one realm still remains.

Marching to the gates of Heaven, will this mad thing win?
Will he live in victory, or will he die in sin?
Crusaders of eternity colide in mighty clashes,
Cries of war and cries of pain, all left with crimson gashes.

The putrid stench of dying men, thickens the dense air,
As triumphant trumpets sound again, and no ones left to care,
Satan laughs, he'll come again, keep watching for the signs,
One thousand years, a dead man's ghost, just read between the lines.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    A very beautifully written piece of work!! i love the emotion and the deepness of it all, keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Fredy

    The way it was structured and how the words had a flow of their own, great job!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jaymes Haze

    Have I told you that you've impressed me, yet?

  • 17 years ago

    by XxbekkaxX

    I absoulty love this poem!! the depth and understanding of what you are writing about, its stupendous!!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    Wow. this is pritty good. actually, its better than good <333