I love this
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This poem is very deep. You wrote this one excellently. Wording is amazing, topic is also great. I like atmosphere that you created, it is incredible.
Well done, this one truly deserves 5/5

Hannah this is absolutely amazing! I honestly cant believe such beautiful work with such descriptive language and such brilliant structure and flow can possibly come from a 13 year old!!! You'll definitely excel in the things you want to do through languages and school. Keep writing my dear - you have won your way onto my favourites thats for sure. Brilliant job and definitely an interesting topic too.

Mo
xx

Wow. this is pritty good. actually, its better than good <333

I absoulty love this poem!! the depth and understanding of what you are writing about, its stupendous!!! 5/5

Have I told you that you've impressed me, yet?

The way it was structured and how the words had a flow of their own, great job!!!

A very beautifully written piece of work!! i love the emotion and the deepness of it all, keep it up!