Wow.
I usually don't like poetry written like that.
But I like how you still rhymed it.
The point of the poem was wonderful... and I completely understand.
I guess I some what know how that feels.
KeepSmiling
Condescending.

This poem is very different then the ones i read and write... so ill hold up my score board

20/20!!!!! keep writting : )

This is such a gud poem i cryed as i read it