Thats really powerful.....but i dont believe i would see nothing if i looked in your soul...

Yeah, it is a really powerful poem. and i know what you mean by saying there is nothing in your soul. great poem, i liked 'if you looked into my dreams you would see happiness'

Great peice,
strong and powerful emotions... great job.. I give it a 5/5

That's so deep. This was a very good poem with a lot of feeling. Definately a 5/5

Hey...me again! sorry just thought id tell you i love this one aswell!! your a great writer! i um..feel the same, like i can relate to your poems! anyway thats all haha! ciao .. Britt xx

I love the emotion that comes from your poems.

I effin lovethis becuz i get exactly what your saying.great job =]

Short, but so good!

This is a strong short poem. it makes me feel your pain a little

Wow...great poem..!!! = p 5/5

Love the way it was written and the way it ended

Deep. I really like this one and i love the last line. You have talent :) 5/5