How can this not have comments yet??

"Am I wrong?
Are they right?
I'll think about it when I'm warm tonight.
I'll think about you little boy,
what else should I do..."

It was such a poignant piece of poetry.. You've managed to portray so many different feelings into this piece that tug on the heartstrings of the reader..
5/5
*Gem*

(P.S. I lived in South Africa too =)

I am really happy to read your poems again and again and comment....
Good job expressing in a better form. Keep writing.

Nazeer

Yet another sweet poem..... keep up the best writing as well as its expressions..

Nazeer

Wow, this poem is so heartfelt, i love it!
keep up the great work !
:)
x

Wow - this was very deep and made me quite emotional. Very sad... and unfortunately very true. I was born in SA and lived there for awhile so I know what you're relating to. Its sad and desperate but we do so often look away and think thoughts that later we have a paradigm shift and feel guilty (and rightly so). Such a great poem.

It just makes me feel lost because how can we reach so many when there are so few willing to do anything.

Mo

xx

Amazing poem... i love this...its very real and heart felt....great job...~*~Cindy~*~