Comments : The day i lost him

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Oh how i can all to well relate to your poem 5/5, the description and format was nice maybe u can read one of mine

  • 17 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    Nicely done, it was well put together and in a strange way it worked really well with rhyming and such. Keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Britta

    Hey...i really like this poem!! i think its great, 5/5 all the way mate!! its such a strong piece! keep writing...always britt x

  • 17 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    I like this poem, luv how u worded it, it rhymes really well 5/5 great job.. n thnx for commentin mine
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Very deep poem hunn it has a lot of meaning to it i loved it <33