Wow that was a truly great poem 5/5 it was original and had great transition and format maybe u can read one of mine.

Nice poem/lyrics. Very good story of it too - I like reading poems with stories behind them... bit sad what we do to each other to hide our feelings away - human nature is a funny ol' thing. :)

Keep writing - you're very good so I'll keep reading!

Mo

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Great poem...i really like it...its very well written and i like the flow...nice job...~*~Cindy~*~

Great poem its amazing, ur a great writer keep it up

5/5