Beautiful poems you portrait here, yet well choice the words.... Even though simply but you expressive them within beautiful emotions... When you run so fast to get somewhere, You miss half the fun of getting there. When you worry and hurry through your day, It is like an unopened gift.... Thrown away... Life is not a race. Do take it slower, Hear the music Before the song is over. What else i can say, well done. Best wishes.

Awh So Sad I Really Loved It Great Job
5/5

I can relate to this piece...
Whole poem is very emotional and truly well written.
My favorite lines are:
-Anguish inside my hidden soul
Repelling all the times I was hurt
Love stricken by your words;-
You're good poet.
5/5

You really are an amazing poet. This is another amazing poem. 5/5

Kale

Well to me this is just another cutting poem
i have heard so many

and the cold hard truth is that
there is nothing speacial about it

i mean its just typical
but at least your not the only one
who wrote about cutting
that means people all have the same general idea

but try to recontrust it on a more
origianl level

in a way a true cutter would do it
people cant write about cutting well if they have never been one

so i shall give this a

4/5

I frikken love this...the emotion and depth behind the words are clearly sensed, imagery is once again beautifully portrayed.
I did think at a couple of times the flow seemed a little shaky, but other than that, this was beautifully written.

You wrote this poem in such great depth, I loved the emotion portrayed yet again you do an amazing job with putting the emotion behind each line. Although you wrote about cutting and they are coming quite cliche these days because I have read so many of them it was still a good poem. The flow was a little off in some place. None the less a good written piece. ~mel

It's saddening to note how the character are liable to committing suicide due to certain problems in life and relationships. This piece pertained much to modern society. There was, once again, a minor issue with the overall flow. It's quite rough of certain areas. But then, again... this work is truly worthy of note. Nice one, nevertheless.

Marian

*is, I mean... not rough. Apologies for the typo and double post. :)

^another typo! my apologies. xox

"How the character is liable to committing suicide..." is what I truly meant to say. :)

I like this poem very much. It was concise but had pithiness. The words are so well putted and the emotions in every line were perfectly portrayed. I really loved it and find it to be really good. Good job.

I liked this poem...It was very truly written well and the emotions in here were just amaizng....Really good read...

5/5