Wow, this poem is greatly written. The imagery in it is superb, I enjoyed in every line. You have excellent choice of words through the whole piece.
Well done, 5/5 from me.
My favorite lines are:
-Broken souls remain behind
Long after they are gone,
A memory of what was,
A reflection of the past.-

I like it very much. Atmosphere that you created is great. This poem is written excellently. Wording is amazing, topic is also good. 5/5

Very well written poem....great visuals and a captivating story...5/5 read my latest "A DEMONS PRAYER" vote and comment thank you

Youre an amazing writer. i really enjoyed reading it. thanks.