You said you loved me

by TanishaLee   Jul 20, 2007


You said you loved me.
But dated her.
You said you would never leave me.
but where are you now?
You said it was forever.
but forever came to soon.
You said you loved me.
but i guess that was a lie too.
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  • 17 years ago

    by The Undoing

    This was okay. More time thinking of your structure and layout would provide a better foundation for your poetic house. Try expanding and using more thought and emotionally provoking words to grab the reader's attention and tears.
    Love,
    =)

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