by N J Thornton Jul 20, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Time moves in a clockwise direction, |
by Marc Ortiz
It was a great poem, I like the language use in this piece, good job. Flow was good, I like the opening stanza I think it really grabs the reader's attention, good job. |
I don't even want to interrupt the good feelings this poem delivers with little editing faux pas..... |