Im so sorry if you had to go through this....

the poem is very interesting though... i like the choice of words .... especially the part that kept repeating...

i really enjoyed reading this poem.

Great peom with nice vocabulary used....all the way 5/5

The arduous misery drawn out by the subject was disquieting. The tone was highly strung and the emotions raw and well expressed. The rhythm was hasty, whereas the rhymes rather forced. But then, again... it was a pleasurable read. It was, in fact, a huge metaphorical poem of a patchwork heart. Nice one, as always. All the best and take care.

I think the 'admitted' in the 2nd line should just be 'admit'.

I like the 'it's been zipped in the left corner, stitched in the right' line you used repeatedly. Added a lot of flavor to the poem when you used it like that.

I enjoyed reading this. It was so true. I like it because anyone can relate to it about any topic, and not just 'oh, my boyfriend broke my heart' but they can relate to it as 'my mom died' or 'my dog has cancer' or something like that. And i personal believe that any person who can write a poem that anyone can relate to about any topic is a pure genius and has a true gift.

Excellent job.