Written like a story...great visual...enjoyable read...captiviating...5/5
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Yet another awsome poem! I love the idea of this one! Nothing is quite what it seems! I love it!

Wow....I can't think of anything to say...I absolutely loved this poem...The wording was incredible and it was just perfect....

They're a family of evilness, a deadly disgrace,
Full of fury and malice, they fell from grace.

^ I Loved Those Lines...They remind me of my Aunt, Uncle, And 2 cousins....

Anyway...Good Job....

5/5....

Great poem! I have one suggestion....tell us what the brother's sin is. You said what the father does, the mother does, and the daughter does, but you basically just say the boy is the devil but you don't tell us why....but i mean it's really good flow and rhyme and definitely dark! Great write!
Charisma*

I really enjoyed reading this. Your wording was great and it really pulls the reader in as it did me. This is an awesome poem to read. Great job, Dear.

5.5
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Wow... that was... dark. That last line was a little odd because 'disgrace' and 'grace' both have 'grace' in them so it sounds right but when I read it, it looks wrong. But whatever. It was alright, not amazing, but I still give it a 5/5